* lordcloudx dons his press cap Wait, what? so, tell us. Was there any particular inspiration for the characters you used in that story? actually this is a pretty decent idea * Retrieving #baka-trio modes... we should have everyone detail the inside story of their works Here or in our releases? here ya * lordcloudx changes topic to ''Anthology: lordcloudx (story http://animerd2k2.net/untitled.htm), Samu-kun (done =3 http://www.megaupload.com/?d=JUFQF3DK), Hime (story/possibly art), Jake (story/art), Kikered (story http://www.geocities.com/kikered/s_final.txt), Drake (story http://pastebin.com/f39661b52) -- Topic - Let's discuss/explain our stories! First up: Kikered' there! I'd say the main inspiration was this one episode of Inukami ooh, go on Lemme grab the name Episode 12: The Dying Me's Song It's about this girl whose family was "cursed" by a shinigami And he would kill her on her 20th birthday unless someone fought the shinigami and won I see but in your story, there were only two parties. so, is that it? More or less. =P :3 right... next question Could you describe the style you used/wanted to use/portray when you wrote your story? I'm not a fan of verbosity or million-dollar words, so I try to keep the diction relatively simple. respectable I also aim to have the text flow simply and logically. logicall, you say. could you elaborate? Um, I'm not quite sure, to be honest. ^^; that's ok take your time >) I do know that it's jarring if I have to re-read portions to make sure I understand what is being said. Albeit, a consequence of having events that can flow together logically is that it makes for predictability ^^; I'd say... it's good to have a bit of predictability layers of predictability Unfortunately, I'm not a skilled enough writer to play on predictability and really surprise the reader ^^; hmm... it's not that hard. Like, you know that the girl is going to die in a certain story. well, there is a saturation point That's the surface layer predictability where something become so predictable, that you actually predict the opposite will happen and it does True. It's one thing to do it subtly and another to make it obvious. how the girl die, you have a free hand with that dies you did add a good twist to your story the shinigami part * Hime has joined #baka-trio greetings, Hime join in * lordcloudx points to topic 'llo Hime! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6mK0EoxK8bw ooh also... What stories? :o if you have any questions for Kikered, now's the time PRESSURE PRESSURE PRESSURE PRESSURE PRESSURE! Hime, where's your short story!? the anthology project * lordcloudx adds more pressure drakey, it's... look, a bird! ooh where? ...really, I've been *HORRIBLY* busy trying not to drop off courses and everything possible D: Our school has an insane limit of 4 absences per course that's kinda strict Aw And it doesn't matter whether you're skipping or on the verge of death, as long as it's 4 absences and then you drop off, bye bye :< well, health and education come first of course yes, unfortunetly I've been writing a few things, but no time for this one I'm afraid then, join in on the discussion maybe talking about our stories will help inspire you awright, Kik anything more to add? because... I have more questions to bombard you with :) Question! Do we have to limit discussion to our anthology stories? not at all I'd really like the hear the inside scoop on Quine too! anything that provokes discussion would be good Not really, regarding my writing "style." ^^; ...! D: you can't deny me this! it's easily one of my favorites! *^^* hey, no big deal you'll get your chance for revenge when it's drake's turn exactly (It'll also help me pass time at work, too =3 ) I know you were paid to idle! ..tch. I've been figured out. actually, I've been wondering for quite some time how come he can be so active in here while at work I'm a relatively new hire, so they don't burden me too heavily most of the time. =3 Back to the discussion, joo! Did you have the same mindset about logical, concise stories when you made Quine? because I notice you used a lot more adjectives and descriptive text. Did I? ^^; yes like the little side comments I think generally, yes. I kinda feel that narration is a way to reflect the main character's mindset also, have you played SO2! !? :) How he thinks, what he notices, etc. I've played it but haven't finished it ^^; So I think it's fine to change things up according to the narrator. your turn, drakey. Grill im *cracks knuckles* Uh oh. Such grilling will only show how much lack of thought there was... so how did you stumble upon this little idea anyway? And will sully his jaded image of it. ^^; I kinda felt it'd be neat to make a metagame. ^^; Originally wanted it to be something people looking to enter the VN scene to learn from. But it ended up being weirdness plus side info marginally relevant to VN making ^^; lies! It's significantly scaled down from a team management sim I originally wanted to try eh? You wanted to make like monel-eh? So it ended up being a campy, rushed mess. ^^; Guess so. I don't recall if this is prior to MagBou or not =3 rushed mess my ass it's gold Ahaha... I'm glad you think so ^^ I'd like to come back and try to make what I originally wanted someday that's nice your art skills have also improved since then Yay school? =3 you took a class? h4rdc0r3! Nope. But I doodled during class. >) oh haha Pretty much every day. so what was the Kikumi story about? the one that got canned :P =3 he's typing... yeah... he's definitely typing. he better be! *cracks knuckles again, this time intimidatingly( ...I don't remember too much, to be honest. ;P cop-out! lies! it was only two years ago wasn't it?! At least for the sim, I was thinking she'd be a skeptical, ball-busting editor. =3 tsundere? Two years is two too long. ;P true, but you couldn't have forgotten such a big part of your life! =3 I still remember every planned detail of EV, and that's long since dead Ok... "You don't need a reason to help people." She's something nebulous between a cameo and an actual character. ._.; where'd you lift that from? FFIX =3 Zidane's quote now I remember Zidane ain't no VN protagonist! Leon indulges in otaku activites like playing games though. ;P jez fyn so how did the process of writing it treat ya? ah! Good one the thread says you started sometime in August, but the release was March... that's some time for a short story Not too kindly, apparently. =3 It's kinda two steps forward and one back Sometimes I'd get a burst where I get a relatively decent amount of lines done. And then I'd read back on what I've got and tweak it a little here and there * xRENx has joined #baka-trio Instead of pushing forward. Hi, Ren greetings, REn join in Hello :3 we're grillin Kikered grilling? asking him about the stories he's written And it repeats and eventually I'd have enough that almost all my time is spent reviewing and tweaking. Oh, afraid I can't. we thought we could use some serious discussion in here I didn't play anything besides Quine, from him. Sensei! that's awright Disciple, the silent one! Quine is included in the discussion he's talkin about it now Oh. I was shooting to get it done at the start of a NaNo, so I rushed, and it really shows. ^^; come on, pitch him a question, sensei! it does not, it's still awesome and full of charm as yet unrivaled Thought it'd be a fun "encouragement" thing Oh, damn, I have to go, sorry. Ahaha ^^; later, Ren See you! Later, Ren * xRENx has quit IRC (Client Quit) she disappeared, and fast indeed =3 For good reason ;) hahahaha oh slashdot, you're hilarious Hm? Article: Why the Widening Gender Gap In Computer Science? first comment: You guys are being creepy. Girls don't like creepy dudes leering at them all the time. some comment further down the page: tits || gtfo Hahaha :) XD okie, simple question most ppl(creators) don't like the time delay when the text displays how come you used it? denzil(for example) used instantly displaying text That I didn't like, but he won't change his mind >( (more slashdot hilarity: To deal with the cold, hard logic of computers all day, you need to be comfortable with such an unemotional, machine-like environment. As an IT worker, I can tell you firsthand that many women aren't comfortable in situations like that. Far too many ex-girlfriends of mine have told me I'm "too much like a robot." To which I reply, "a sex robot?" And they say no. :-( ) ( XD ) answer? :) man Hm... I think it kinda helps the text more... "conversational" as per Leon's narration? L4D is awesome I agree With spoken converstaion, timing helps with punch lines and side comments and such. *conversation and somehow, there's some kinda aesthetic appeal to a slower than instant text-speed for me. Indeed. It isn't too inconvenient for the user to click once to get it all if they want it that way, too. yes it is ehe! A dissenter are you encouraging RSI?! not at all you can use enter :P no no cloud, I don't dissent however, I'm gonna take the middle ground here Pah. They can change the settings if they want to that badly. =3 agreed exactly so I hate it when games set it to instant, and I hate it when the next highest speed is too slow Besides, if gamers don't have RSI yet, they're bound for it anyway. ;P hah! RSI is for the weak play with handgrips everyday, son you'll never have to worry about RSI evah! hah! hah! hah! got anything else to ask im, drakey? (for the record, I prefer near-instant speeds... I need just enough to have it typed out, but I still need it fast cuz I hate waiting) it can be daunting I'd have to replay the game to hit him with any other questions with tsukihime sized vns I think I'm spent :) awright here's a semi-tough one Can you describe Solangel's appearance in your mind as accurately as possible? is she like Kamio Misuzu with green hair? :D Ahaha, I'm not quite sure. =3 what color /is/ her hair? the sprites were b&w, weren't they?! yep here eyes are green I was thinking silver for hair color. her Silver... I see, I see and her skin would be pale >) I can see it! Indeed. Relatively. =3 what about teh hairstyle? Is it Haruhi-esque? I think I tried blue when I was coloring, saw how terrible it was, and decided that I failed at coloring. =3 so why color the eyes? oh drake http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gnPpaJ8w5Kk&feature=related Because I thought I could do eyes after seeing how they did it in the Canvas 2 anime ._. hmm... I should download the opening theme for that it's kinda nice ...? I-I don't get it that's one dramatic ad isn't that sad? no, it's just an ad but I see references to /b/ so I probably shouldn't For hairstyle, I was originally shooting for something like the heroine of Panzer Dragoon Orta. =3 http://shinforce.com/xbox/reviews/PanzerDragoonOrta/wpd-PDO-1024.jpg yah, she's pretty it was in baww thread http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Un2slS7q5Zw&watch_response so we finished one campaign with monele took us 2 hour but it was cool She also had an awesome hat for the intro level ^^ btw sequel? >) don't touch the original, j00 continue the story =3 also, I've gathered enough info from you to make sum fanart next question! Out of your works, which one is your favourite? Why? (including unfinished ones, of course) Eh? Wha? !! =O Works as in...? awww Anything I've seen, read, etc? From a particular medium? your own, i imagine yup Ohh. I missed the first "your" ^^; hee hee http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/6594/harunyanee8.jpg I probably liked them to some degree to start working on them ^^; since you seem intent on dodging the question, what did you like about em? >) =3 I think my current project "Swan Song" may be my favorite for the time being. =3 why? It isn't really a swan song is it? For Quine, I liked the idea of a metagame. ^^; that line seems familiar Oh no, not for me. =3 I still have the original Quine to realize! oh well, gtg soon guess we can change targets after this session I don't think anyone else has anything to ask we should have a designated target per day It's a working title, but it could pass for an actual one if I can't think of anything better ._. yah unless FIA wants to ask something Whew. =3 now zen... anything else you wish to add? (question stolen from m12's dlsite interviews) oh that's right! you got interviewed! yah me, DaFool and Blue Lemma !! I guess m12 just picked whoeva came to mind What? Huh? Ah not mikey? yah hai, kore http://eng.dlsite.com/circle/report/=/report/0012 when was this, btw? eh... lemme check 'Anthology: lordcloudx (story http://animerd2k2.net/untitled.htm), Samu-kun (done =3 http://www.megaupload.com/?d=JUFQF3DK), Hime (story/possibly art), Jake (story/art), Kikered (story http://www.geocities.com/kikered/s_final.txt), Drake (story http://pastebin.com/f39661b52) -- Topic - Let's discuss/explain our stories! First up: Kikered Mar 31, 2008 First up: Kikered I am waiting where've you been, Enerccio you've not been paying attention you mean I have been in L4D with monele it was awesome very nice So, the pm from M12 came last March 31 (eh, right at the end of nano) oh... wait that's not right the article reads jan 17 Jan 17 yeah I'm the most talkative out of the three of us interviewed naturally, you must be the most interesting >) I sure am! ahahahaha! =3 hee! I think we did a good job today >) gtg later, ppl thanks for sharing with us, tetris kid I beat you at pure! :P =(